Tuesday, January 08, 2008

Sociopath rough pages

So i finally scanned a few pages of the comic i'm working on, its called sociopath and its written by Axel Matfin ( his link is the section) these 3 pages are taken near the middle-end part of the comic.
the first page is the first picture going left to right ( it might be a bit confusing)
since its a rough stage i haven't added text or much detail yet, i also need to tighten up some of the drawings.
anyway feel free to leave comments on it etc


Goobeetsablog said...

great effort! the drawing is looking pretty solid.

if you don't mind a few thoughts
I can see that you are mixing up
the camera angles and size of the figures- and that's great. But remember to use the viewpoints to tell the story. What is emotion behind this scene- what is the best way to develop that?

Print this one
out and stick it on the board above your table (that is if you haven't already)

and check out Eisner's Book
Comics and Sequential Art

Best of luck to you!

macaronni said...

Good to see your comics (finally!)

What's the story about? Or is that to be announced? :P

robi pena said...

Hello Dan!

Thank you!! Nice works you have in your blog!! I like very much your personages:-)!! Congratulations!

Greats Robi!

Alexei Martins said...

Awesome art!!!Love the Spider-Man sketch!!!

tom said...

Hey, you working on a comic?

Tom Ståle Engebretsen said...

Like your drawings. Cool site.

Tom Ståle Engebretsen (Norway)